Just for a Thrill: Poems

Evaluation

EVALUATION neglects to respond altogether it often takes months for him to get out after the holiday season but no one outside the people knows “I can’t explain it: that’s just the way industry is” we paid the same amount buying the photo business would know his job depends on doing it successfully or question his pronouncements that manipulation occurs on important issues seems insignificant he’d be much more effective if he was honest & straightforward two other changes made to the text how come there are no quotation marks these are straw men he blames the problem on being rushed then reads two rooms will ruin the aesthetics of the weight work could be where he wants to go with what’s present 52 * make changes without consultation & seem to care passionately answer problems: “I have no idea how to do others’ wishes & what he doesn’t want” his response seems disingenuous he doesn’t engender trust he doesn’t follow the collective force he has little or no respect 53 * understanding & failure remind repeatedly not to follow-up on ideas under supervision takes time to complete & often don’t get done at all the result drags & we don’t have a choice the title word changes to provide a (blank) to be consulted low through assignments here to decisions take full responsibility he blames a clash of cultures he raises false issues do we really want 18 words believe we can call nature 54 * it took months to get in he especially avoids things he doesn’t want to do asserts common practice seems to change to fit what to do to hold on because he’s such a contrarian he’s often exasperating 55 * you know you’re right at that point bold was removed —marks were inserted— the mailing problem couldn’t identify next day notice all openings so delayed by the first week despite GM intervention that cut artificial distance a low productivity level we have to indicate the data base add a sentence (2 lines): “how can that be?” many still hadn’t received who was on what institutions these problems were discussed 56 * a trust problem claimed technical reasons he was told work for him or spend time supervising him I don’t consult the work of others he defies wishes: “blows up” demands reprints: despite his suggestion his own request within several days —& then told it was too late— ad take those with ultimate control he doesn’t realize seriousness of issues or just doesn’t care but wouldn’t agree to sentence grammatical even though the meaning & intent conforms to his own judgment 57 * especially egregious context suggests jargon laden complicated nature of bulk trust he should contact the lost post does not follow up doesn’t pay didn’t develop a happened to style when confronted changes title understanding procedures is off want asserts things with such conviction a bold tone an inappropriate indication his response had no top attention minute detail no apparent reason pit bull determination entrepreneurial in December he’s not demonstrated significant change 58 ...